Tuesday, August 26, 2008

~my Way...Bak Comments

Rating: 2.3

Why do you build me up?
Red blood runs through my veins.
Slam the door,
Red turns black stuck in its track.
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Dislocated Heart
red
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 August 2008

An interesting delivery of expression...the work carries much verve & (what it appears to be) genuine poetic spontaneity...Commendable Work. ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 August 2008

An interesting delivery of expression...the work carries much verve & (what it appears to be) genuine poetic spontaneity...Commendable Work. ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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