Saturday, January 23, 2016

My Way Comments

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I promise to be your son.
To do as you say, i may.
To do as not by my hand-
I could as well die by May.
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daniel okullu
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Jeresi Katusime 28 July 2017

Its beautifully written

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 June 2017

All i ever ask, Please, let me do it my way. Conveying very well the theme of individuality and uniqueness. thank you dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 June 2017

A nice psychological poem. Thanks

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daniel okullu

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Lira, Uganda
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