~ My Way... Comments

your name writes itself across my sky. and the stars are just aline. great lines. this is a really sweet love poem. I really liked it. it is written well.good job.Becca

I like this poem. Its very cute! ^-^ Jess xx

with the hermits and the crabs, with the star fish and clams, i'll arrange it on the shore and spell your name, i'll whisper the golden words eyes closed while holding my loving heart...that's my way of telling I LOVE YOU...beautiful piece...