i was living in the darkness where no's one there
i cried so loudly but no one cares..
i rose my head up to see the blue sky but it was grey..
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very optimistic and brave. You deserved the call. I hope you can make it last. Good job, Dana.
wakes me smile: D......i think i need a wake up call: P......well written! excellent flow and make up: D 10+++
well written work realise ourself is the courage and strength that is great now, thanks,10+
a beautiful writting with beautiful emoions little poet..10++++
yes no one cares... and we should learn to smile on this careless situation! ! nice poem fellow...10+
wonderful lines, deep meaning thanks for sharing continue writing
this poem is really touching love it mell =)