Saturday, May 16, 2009

*~*~my Wake Up Call~*~* Comments

Rating: 4.8

i was living in the darkness where no's one there
i cried so loudly but no one cares..

i rose my head up to see the blue sky but it was grey..
...
Read full text

dana XxX
COMMENTS
Melissa Cundill 15 June 2009

this poem is really touching love it mell =)

0 0 Reply
Luis Gil 14 June 2009

very optimistic and brave. You deserved the call. I hope you can make it last. Good job, Dana.

0 0 Reply
Angelic Warrior 14 June 2009

wakes me smile: D......i think i need a wake up call: P......well written! excellent flow and make up: D 10+++

0 0 Reply
Vinod Kumar 13 June 2009

well written work realise ourself is the courage and strength that is great now, thanks,10+

0 0 Reply
Alen Alexander 11 June 2009

this was real good! : D like it! !

0 0 Reply

a beautiful writting with beautiful emoions little poet..10++++

0 0 Reply
Muhammad Ali 17 May 2009

yes no one cares... and we should learn to smile on this careless situation! ! nice poem fellow...10+

0 0 Reply
Fearless D 17 May 2009

Thought provoking, gj

0 0 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

Marvelous poem 10+

0 0 Reply
Akram Awadat 16 May 2009

wonderful lines, deep meaning thanks for sharing continue writing

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success