My Voyage Comments

The narrative scares and the spirit of a rough weather on the sea sends shivers down the spine. Bur the sudden decline in the ferocity of waves brings a blissful relief to the voyagers. At a point when it was about to drown The tempest subsided, the sky turned clear

life's journey is full of storms knowledge and judgement will the battle won Thanks Valsa.++

Life of voyage so beautifully depicted and inspires one to live life gallantly......Valsa.......great imagery accompanied with inspiring lines to face life courageously........great write.....10/10

Wow Valsa this was an awe inspiring poem. I don't like being on the water but your so nicely expressed boat ride was a pleasure. We may set out to embark on an adventure but may happen across some obstacles along the way. We must keep our eyes on whats up ahead and try no to lose our focus. Just around the corner if we hang on there is blessings. Lovely.

A fantastic voyage with excellent presentation.Your imagery is brilliant !

our voyage in life will be full to turmoil, but we must continue on. nice writing

The trials of life's rich tapestry.

excellently written poem Valsa, couldn't have put it better than this.

I have nothing to add new, when so many talents expressed their appreciation. But it is awesome. very Nice feeling.

Just awesome, as always intriguing as only you can do it.

h, Blessed Poet, Keep Praising the Lord of the worlds for this unbounded magnificence that is filled with giggling ripples of enthralling literary excellence! I can still feel the salty froth, nocturnal slant rain on bare swollen waves, the voyager's destiny, the glimmering cliff by the unknown shores, silent silver moon partially-engulfed by the dark heralds of lethal clouds and what not... still, the tint of philosophy remains haunting across the avalanche of human life. A wonderful homage to the Goddess of Poesy. God Bless. With immense Regards and Love for considering to write a review on my humble verses.

Take.....10+ saluté...respect ma'am...

It's often scary moving on to pastures new, and there are often difficulties ahead which we cant predict. But life is a challenge, a challenge we have to face in order to move on. A very good write Valsa, which I enjoyed reading.

a new horizon of hopes made this sweet voyager in the cloudy sea And The waves rose to mountain heights Thunders bellowed over the wild waters And the sea into an aggressive fiend turned

Indeed a superb piece of art, trying to explain the mystery Of life....... Life whose identity is still a mystery for us, a voyage in a timeless vista but beyond our Authority and will and has to be encounter with grit and will. Herman Melvill says that life is a voyage that's Homeward bound......it's yielding an insights into the poet's heat and soul And we should not forget Hardy (Tess & Jude) who admits the savageness of fate that has to be fulfilled....such piece of artistic expression might turn you as a stoic or cynic as we are sure that these tempests will strike again Sometimes its seems a smooth glide into a space but suddenly a peril welcome you from nowhere, so we must bless our vision with new meaning and understanding to cope it. A great drama of life has been explained in the voyage.... i would say a Romantic philosophy that takes our souls to regions far and unknown!