My Voice Of The Sapphire Emotions Of A Fading String! Comments
O Halfheartedness!
Are you the only emotion left in me?
O Nonchalant!
Why do you worry while singing?
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part 2---O Halfheartedness! Are you the only emotion left in me? ---fell in love with the presentation of these question--awesome and creative write---
Thank you for liking it and for your kind comments. I like your kind disposition, especially its effect and tone in your poems! Unnikrishna, told me how fabulous a writer you are.
this is so different from the poems I normally read---different and it sweeps me up into your world!
A sublime emotional rendering. Reveals all what we usually like to hide. Shares what we normally keep to ourselves, making the heart heavy. Now that the heart is lighter, " Tell me, O susceptible, isn't my heart less gloomy now? " loved it.5*
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7/19/2025 10:19:14 PM # 1.0.0
top marks! ! ! !