Friday, July 4, 2008

My Village Comments

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Miles away my village
through rocky thorny way, yet
I love going there!
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Sathya Narayana
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Aiswarya. T.anish 19 May 2009

Wow you caught the beauty of your village in this poem..........loved it

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 02 October 2008

that was a vivid desccription of ur village.. :)

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Raj Nandy 16 September 2008

It is rather unfortunate that our present generation do not have any contact with the village. In fact a vast majority have not seen a village! Let this poem be dedicated to them! -Raj Nandy

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Kesav Easwaran 15 July 2008

a nice poem giving the picture, live, of native village life once enjoyed...liked

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 06 July 2008

'I love going there' is used as a refrain to regain a sense of belonging. A fulfillment one keeps replenished. I like this poem very much. It expresses a basicness that has solidified your 'foundation'. Very nice.

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baylei_ slater 04 July 2008

this is realy good i am inspired by your work! ! .....better than me...lol

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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