My Village Comments

Wow you caught the beauty of your village in this poem..........loved it

that was a vivid desccription of ur village.. :)

It is rather unfortunate that our present generation do not have any contact with the village. In fact a vast majority have not seen a village! Let this poem be dedicated to them! -Raj Nandy

a nice poem giving the picture, live, of native village life once enjoyed...liked

'I love going there' is used as a refrain to regain a sense of belonging. A fulfillment one keeps replenished. I like this poem very much. It expresses a basicness that has solidified your 'foundation'. Very nice.

this is realy good i am inspired by your work! ! .....better than me...lol