My Village Comments
It is a long time since
I left my African Village
And to town I made my the passage
With a bundle of clothes
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Lovely to share your childhood memories. You must have wonderful stories to share with your family. Thank You
A lovely write on your childhood memories full of happiness and certainly not dull. You must have wonderful stories to share with your family.
A Beautiful village memories, with varied images composed into a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing with us. Congratulations on member poem of the day!
Dr. Ahmed, this is a very beautiful poem. My African Village, is a very attractive title. Your memories unfolding like a pretty flower with the moon, the stars, the women, the animals - vivid images captured so fascinatingly in this poem. Hearty Congratulations! A full vote for you Sir! 10
Everything is seen through a child's wonderstruck eyes. In this poem you have summoned up magical moments, shared in elegant language. Congratulations on being selected as Poem of the Day.
It is so nice Denis to have such a nice comment. I am very happy about this.
Well said, I felt like smelling the village through your words, congratulations on poem of the day
Very vivid memories of you African childhood. Your story told so well here as we travel back in time with you. Excellent, thanks so much for sharing and congratulations on Poem Of The Day. A well deserved vote of 10 from me Ahmed
Thank you Sara so much for your share. I am very happy with your comment.
lovely dewy eyed words for village life- great sharing - thanks 10+++
Dr Ahmed, such a well penned poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... perfect 10++++
Your village captured you fully and mesmerized you lovingly which is explored by lovely poetic diction nice +++10
sounds patriotism, love for village is love for country with nation, community, ...... Congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us
Congratulations on being in this category. A wonderfully crafted write imaged filled. To be an excellent poet you must take us on a walk with you, observing everything you see. You have done this brilliantly.++++10
To school on foot! ! ! With the muse of the African Child. Nice piece of work.
Enjoyed your journey in memory to the African village which you left long ago! The life of the African people living in rural setting and their simple occupations and simple pursuits are brought to life in vivid details. The nostalgic longing for one's place of birth left behind is always there in most people however better may be their present place of settlement. I read this narrative poem with absorbing interest as if reading a short story!
Thanks Valsa. Yes I am still yearning for those days of the village. That was a wonderful time.
Thank you so much Roseann for your encouraging comment.
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7/23/2025 9:15:31 AM # 1.0.0
A well versed n crafted poem filled with beautiful images that I can relate with thanks for sharin