Wednesday, March 19, 2008

My Very Own Addiction Comments

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tilt ya head back
and arch your back up
and wait for the signals
that triggers your eruption
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jasmine margetson
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Scott Austin 20 March 2008

The passion in your heart is felt in the words you have expressed in this piece. Scott

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Bethany M. 20 March 2008

awesome poem! i do like it. really well..... developed i guess you could say! :) wonderfully written I think it was a very good poem. keep up the good work

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Ashley LeBlanc 20 March 2008

Wow... this is a great poem, your word choices are great. Well written, your a great writer.

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