tilt ya head back
and arch your back up
and wait for the signals
that triggers your eruption
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awesome poem! i do like it. really well..... developed i guess you could say! :) wonderfully written I think it was a very good poem. keep up the good work
Wow... this is a great poem, your word choices are great. Well written, your a great writer.
The passion in your heart is felt in the words you have expressed in this piece. Scott