Yesterday midnight
amidst my dream
she arrived
entered into me
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so you felt the feel how a poem works within the soul..........great...
love your 'Lady Poetry' Kesav... have you read my poem 'A Gentleman Poet'.... i think you will see yourself in him....
Kesav, you love writing poetry, you must have very sweet dreams as your poems like this one are beautiful. Warm Regards Bob
line mixed with love, care, romance and innocense.......all under a roof........a dream which all longing fr.............10++ sebastine
splendid piece...amazing with wonderful thoughts, wonderful words wonderful dreams of your love, excellent lines... ...........................all are found in this piece... ...and these lines.... And through out night she lovingly stayed inside my closed eyes; when the morn arrived softly awakened i didn’t open my eyes lest she should leave my sight body and mind….....SO SWEET AND ROMANTIC.....
your dreams are brilliant and pure and the is an angle in that dream and soooo beautiful. it is nice poem and the imagination is great: touch silky smooth, , warmth of mouth, , , pla pla pla, , nice poem, well done
...a fine touchy poem. style of expression i liked......thanks
We all see the vanishing beauties in our dreams; but cannot express like u. Mbe your expressions are eternal beauties sathya narayana
ah...she is a dark and elusive mistress! wonderful imagery and sensual use of words.
A wonderful write, my friend. I've heard it said that great poems seek out a poet and inspire them. You obviously have a great relationship with Lady Poetry, and that benefits all of us, who have the opportunity to read the results. Thanks for sharing this excellent work. Richard
Love this poem, Kesav. We can each have our beloved with us - in our mind's eye. Fx
Hello again poet. WOW and amazing poen of love and romance, Loyd
May your Lady Love never vanish. May Lady poetry come into your dreams every day to inspire you more and more with her sweet kisses and with warm hugs of her softer bodylines for ever so that the world may say like Shelley: Teach (us) half the the gladness That thy brain must know, Such harmonious (words) From (our pens) would flow, The world would (read us) then as (we are reading) now.
The gentle eroticism makes Lady Poetry a most welcome guest... Rgds, Ivan
how beautiful...the relationship between that lady and you...she brings out the best in you.....10