Wednesday, June 18, 2008

My Vanishing Beauty... Comments

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Yesterday midnight
amidst my dream
she arrived
entered into me
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 September 2009

how beautiful...the relationship between that lady and you...she brings out the best in you.....10

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premji premji 01 August 2009

so you felt the feel how a poem works within the soul..........great...

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Sonya Florentino 18 June 2009

love your 'Lady Poetry' Kesav... have you read my poem 'A Gentleman Poet'.... i think you will see yourself in him....

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Carol Gall 28 May 2009

beautiful dreams excellent poem 10

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Bob Blackwell 09 May 2009

Kesav, you love writing poetry, you must have very sweet dreams as your poems like this one are beautiful. Warm Regards Bob

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Sebastine Humaemo 08 February 2009

line mixed with love, care, romance and innocense.......all under a roof........a dream which all longing fr.............10++ sebastine

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 January 2009

splendid piece...amazing with wonderful thoughts, wonderful words wonderful dreams of your love, excellent lines... ...........................all are found in this piece... ...and these lines.... And through out night she lovingly stayed inside my closed eyes; when the morn arrived softly awakened i didn’t open my eyes lest she should leave my sight body and mind….....SO SWEET AND ROMANTIC.....

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Yasser Koor 01 December 2008

your dreams are brilliant and pure and the is an angle in that dream and soooo beautiful. it is nice poem and the imagination is great: touch silky smooth, , warmth of mouth, , , pla pla pla, , nice poem, well done

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 October 2008

...a fine touchy poem. style of expression i liked......thanks

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Reshma Ramesh 02 October 2008

wow very nice indeed.....beautiful

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 August 2008

We all see the vanishing beauties in our dreams; but cannot express like u. Mbe your expressions are eternal beauties sathya narayana

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Seema Chowdhury 02 July 2008

very nicely composed poem. very imaginative words used.

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L. K. Thayer 02 July 2008

ah...she is a dark and elusive mistress! wonderful imagery and sensual use of words.

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C.R. Clark 01 July 2008

A wonderful write, my friend. I've heard it said that great poems seek out a poet and inspire them. You obviously have a great relationship with Lady Poetry, and that benefits all of us, who have the opportunity to read the results. Thanks for sharing this excellent work. Richard

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Flora Gillingham 01 July 2008

Love this poem, Kesav. We can each have our beloved with us - in our mind's eye. Fx

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 28 June 2008

An excellent Poetic romance................my 10

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 27 June 2008

Hello again poet. WOW and amazing poen of love and romance, Loyd

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C. P. Sharma 27 June 2008

May your Lady Love never vanish. May Lady poetry come into your dreams every day to inspire you more and more with her sweet kisses and with warm hugs of her softer bodylines for ever so that the world may say like Shelley: Teach (us) half the the gladness That thy brain must know, Such harmonious (words) From (our pens) would flow, The world would (read us) then as (we are reading) now.

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Subbaraman N V 27 June 2008

Beauty of Lady Poetry never vanishes!

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Ivan Donn Carswell 26 June 2008

The gentle eroticism makes Lady Poetry a most welcome guest... Rgds, Ivan

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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