Friday, May 19, 2017

My Valentine Comments

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My Valentine

A special touch from heaven's door
Reached out and drew me near,
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John Ackerman
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Jefferson Carter 19 May 2017

John, you need to read some good contemporary poetry. You won't improve as a poet if you don't immerse yourself in the best current work. It's very difficult to write a formal poem that doesn't feel like an anachronism. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me what you think. Yrs, JC

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