Saturday, August 2, 2014

My Valentine Comments

Rating: 5.0

When we first met
We both had nothing

Worlds apart
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Darwin Henry Beuning
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Grace Diane Jessen 09 August 2021

A lovely poem! My daughter spent several months in Thailand and loved the country and the people. Congratulations on finding a love that lasted!

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Gail Holt 08 July 2019

Love this poem! It is interesting to read the details of when and where you met. It is so romantic!

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Michael Walker 23 May 2019

An endorsement of love and marriage for life, which I like. A passing allusion to Robert frost's poem, 'Fire and Ice' fits well in the poem. I identify with 'We both had nothing', and 'Then, Now, and Forever'. I have had nothing at times.

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Kathy Wright 21 December 2018

Wonderful love and a love that continues strong!

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Kathy Wright 21 December 2018

Beautiful poem about a tender love. Bea, our sister-in-law, coming to America. So exciting for our family. A love that brought our family closer together.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2017

On first meeting you were nothing. But there was love and this was initiated. Heart met the combination of fire and ice. You have cleverly presented this poem of love. This love has brought you ahead for now and forever. An amazing poem this is definitely...10

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Darwin Henry Beuning 13 February 2017

My wife and I have returned to Thailand to celebrate our 41st wedding anniversary. We will spend two months here, away from the Utah cold. My wife Samur is still my precious rose and will be forever more!

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Pietro 6 07 February 2016

My best wishes for both of you. I send you my congratulation for your Poem, a beautiful demonstration of love

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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2014

A lovely narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned to capture the essence of the piece. A treasure found on Val's day. A blissful blend of hot and cold. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kim Barney 17 August 2014

Great poem, Hank! I love it. Kim

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Darwin Henry Beuning

Darwin Henry Beuning

Melrose, Minnesota
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