My Utopia Comments

I agree that the work is more a description of your ideals than an image of them, but images are so hard to create when you are dealing with a dificult subject like this. Remember, if it looks like a duck, and sounds like a duck, it's a poem! Your ideas are heartfelt and profound, and well written. Thanks for sharing.

It's more a dissertation than a poem Lacy, nevertheless well crafted...