Friday, October 21, 2016

My Upanishadic Birdie Pie - 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

The next morning, as I sipped a hot cup of tea
And began writing,
Thoughts flow and I complete a page,
I look up and whom do I see?
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Shruti Verman 08 July 2020

On a rainy morning & a hot cup of tea, this poem is the perfect thing.. And that Carolina Chikadee is complimenting the poem just right!

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Amazing poem. Your thoughts and nature merged beautifully.

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Loke Kok Yee 26 May 2017

Nature and spirituality is interwoven but your ability to bring them together is amazing. I am only able to perceive nature in the raw as is evident in my poems, your write had tempted me to look beyond, though I do not think that I will be too successful. Thanks Geeta-10

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Valsa George 14 February 2017

I like the way you conjoin lofty thoughts and the lively scenes from Nature and weave a beautiful tapestry of words! Your birdie pie and the squirrel are so nimble and lively! These characters delight the readers with their typical movements and sounds!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2016

A very impressive poem. I agree with your thoughts that Ahimsa is a synthesis of several virtues!

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