Sunday, April 24, 2016

My Unroofed Village Comments

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Poem: My unroofed village

My village is far away
Farther than your
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Sumaila Mohammed Rashad
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 April 2016

Far away, , , , , , near, hot, high, wide, cold, perforated roof........ my Unroofed village. very good poem full of ideas and imagination. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 April 2016

'Nearer than the greying hairs on your hair'! Nice work.

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