Saturday, March 25, 2017

My Universe Comments

Rating: 5.0

my universe collapsed
I was your love, your queen, your desire
the one that occupied your mind and heart
the one that loved and cherished you
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Luz H.
COMMENTS

very touching... beautifully expressed!

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Lyn Paul 20 April 2019

Pure heartache when the truth is revealed. You have climbed many mountains. I hope you are almost at the top.

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Luz Hanaii 22 April 2019

I appreciate your nice comment. Yes, I've climbed many mountains by now. and almost at the top. This is a snapshot of the past, I'm doing good now. Thank you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 May 2018

A saddest poem about the collapsed universe, love, loss and greatest grief. Amazingly created straight from the heart. Gorgeous write! Thank you for sharing, Luz! I do hope all is better now with you.Hugs and love from Sylvia.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 April 2018

Sufferings of deception in love, a sad and touching poem.

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