My Unenlightened Self Comments

Great poem.It was a beautiful poem.With much good rhythm.With tattered leaves and yellow leaves he is a green field.

Simulacrum of Night and day with the sweetness dusk and dawn. ...... beautiful...

Beautiful poem! Thank you!

Salty and sweet with manifold rhymes, With rhapsodic change of mind He is active with life embracing everything as blessing,

Drink the juice of life and death, With Ceres and with her Proserpina, he sleeps with comfy trance, With fanciful dream of Concourse.

With alert mind he is like star of heaven, With unaware dream he is often deeply delightedpain and voluptuous

A wise man is a wise sufferer, With smile drink venom... ....

A Nightingale and an Owl, Simulacrum of Night and day with the sweetness dusk and dawn.. .......fine

An enlightened mind is often deeply dark....well penned..dear poet...thethe

He hovers sometimes from sky to skyless eremite, From passionless love to sensual tunefulness and then to compassionate Care, . really a great poem. indeed such a lot of thinking has gone into this poem....... you elevate yourself to become a great poet and philosopher and a spiritual being. thank u dear. tony

The tangible world is poison, With sugar and honey for it's taste, Tasting it is abnegation, Loving it is to be nowhere, It is not easy to live with one eye, With other beyond the vision..... ...........fine poem

This is one of ur best. Wonderful....wonderful poem. Thanks. anjandev roy.

Beautiful poem with clarity of thought and vision.. thanks

Very beautiful poem...great thought...../////

A selfless write of a poet's thoughts brought forth from darkness into the wonder of life's true light.

He is active with life embracing everything as blessing, dear poet, i have enjoyed reading your poem which speaks about the deep realities of life which one come across. one who stay still and look into and around life becomes aware of it. And you could do it. congratualtions! 10 points

With alert mind he is like star of heaven, With unaware dream he is often deeply delightedpain and voluptuous,

vast sepulchre of enlightenment, He is a grave and the canopy of full moon Night, A Nightingale and an Owl, Simulacrum of Night and day with the sweetness dusk and dawn

Salty and sweet with manifold rhymes, With rhapsodic change of mind! A poem that sings the opposites of life in rhythmic splendour- like the night and the day, the darkness and the light, like the nightingale and the owl, like the dusk and the dawn, like life and death! ! This poet is not an unenlightened self but an enlightened one who certainly understands and knows the 'Self'! A huge 10 for you Prabir!

a great poem! enlightened philosophy! beautiful imagery! a piece of figurative language; oxymorons, paradoxes, similes and metaphors are great. enlightened message to be carried. please give your precious critical view.