Tuesday, October 14, 2008

My Unbreakable Comments

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The softest soil in still water.
Drops of blood soon will cover.
I will still linger.
Buried without ease.
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Naru Kaede 22 November 2008

Wooooowww... 'Pieces but never been broken. Wounded but never been killed..' Can I be that strong...? ? ? Wonderful one! keep write, Love your poem! Naru Kaede, ,

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Ency Bearis 15 October 2008

great verses..and strong upliftment of emotion well expressed..well done... Ency Bearis

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