Saturday, March 30, 2019

My Unborn Self Comments

Rating: 5.0

My Unborn Self

Who is there inside my Being!
Small inaudible voice do I hear,
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Prabir Gayen
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 April 2019

Soul of my mind! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Namita Rani Panda 02 April 2019

The unborn voice is voiced beautifully.

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M Asim Nehal 31 March 2019

Your legacy, they will bear the torch and will march to next gen. Lovely poem PG.10+

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Srijita Mondal 31 March 2019

Brilliantly written poem to describe unmanifested pain or pain for unmanifestation..

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Srijita Mondal 31 March 2019

Cute picture of Rudra and his little sister Aradhya

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Kostas Lagos 30 March 2019

A wonderful piece of work Prabir!

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Prabir Gayen 30 March 2019

Thanks dear friend.....//////

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 30 March 2019

a beautiful and very thoughtful poem that gives the message of never to stop in life and always be ready to go on. this poem remindes me of Judith Wright's poem Woman to Man by its language and great usage of paradoxes.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 March 2019

you PG alone are the greatest soul and i SINGULARLY sole

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Julia Luber 30 March 2019

Resonating with self consciousness, Prabir nonetheless attributes a voice inside himself to something yet unborn or always surfacing only through poetry,

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Haruna Garba 30 March 2019

That is the real you. Thanks for sharing.

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Prabir Gayen 30 March 2019

Great to have you as my friend.... thanks

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Haruna Garba 30 March 2019

That real you. Thanks for sharing.

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