Wednesday, August 15, 2007

My Ugly Suzan Comments

Rating: 4.9

In my dreams i saw a genie coming to my serenity.
With a so ugly face approaches she tries to taint my sanctity.
She is Suzan like a trash was too smelly and too dirty.
Looking for her dreams pig but no one is worthy.
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 July 2010

Genie a.k.a Suzan ~ tough to handle if done be careful please…lolol… thanks for sharing … Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Reminds me of a saying...cant teach an old dog new tricks. An interesting read.: D

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Judging by appearence and not by the truth within the soul can make a great loss in reality.Fun poem.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 September 2008

10 for this pretty composition.

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Nathaniel Booker 04 September 2008

This poem reminds me of a movie I recently saw, it's a new release and it's called Penelope, it's about a girl who was born with a pig snout. It was an amazing moving rivaled by this poem. Be Well

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 August 2008

good composition......10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 August 2008

pretty love describes in a pretty scenic way.keep up the good writes issam.

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