Saturday, April 19, 2008

My Two Loves Comments

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My passion is shared by my poetry and by you
And for each, it's growing ever stronger
That I'm in love with you both is undeniably true
And I'll love you forever, and even longer
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Harry J. Couchon Jr
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Abha Sharma 19 April 2008

how nicely you have blended the two loves... diction, imagery and smooth rhyme make the poem interesting.

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Patricia Gale 19 April 2008

An open insight how others can affect our inner self... a birth of being. Well done Harrry

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Harry J. Couchon Jr

Harry J. Couchon Jr

Bronx New York
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