Wednesday, June 3, 2009

** My Twilight Dreams ** Comments

Rating: 3.8

When shades of twilight
close day’s bright
And when in my solitude
close my eyes light
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ANJALI SINHA
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Ted M 21 July 2009

Beautiful dream, had the effect of watching a lovely bollywood movie. Nice subject, lovely script, great flow; all in all a wonderful treat. Let me stand up and clap +++

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Nikunj Sharma 20 July 2009

let the dreams be the means to a meaningful day to a fulfiling evening and a satisfying night so that you can hold his hand and walk on the carpet of twilight and keep walking and whole universe you roam till one day the cows come home............... niks

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Nikunj Sharma 20 July 2009

let the dreams be the means to a meaningful day to a fulfiling evening and a satisfying night so that you can hold his hand and walk on the carpet of twilight and keep walking and whole universe you roam till one day the cows come home............... niks

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Marieta Maglas 10 July 2009

nice similes: ''And I as I sink afar in that nocturnal bliss and will not miss as my soul rises in unison the twinkling of the stars as in heaven’s garrison Where under your brightest shine My nocturnal dreams begin.'' embedded in this lyric poem....

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Indira Renganathan 21 June 2009

Highly decorative dream of love...you've marvelled

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009

Its a great presentation of Art, the dream of the century! ! Well done.

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Duh Huh 14 June 2009

Wow Anjali, this is awesome, and very creative. I love how you spun this tale of love. Thank you for sharing your talent :)

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Afzal Shauq 14 June 2009

wow what a sweeet poem is this one..liekd it much..10+++++++++++

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C. P. Sharma 14 June 2009

Capturing poetry sublime love. CP

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Antonio Liao 13 June 2009

a wish in my dream has come to reality of the poem... my vow and alluring passion of the poet...you have just touch the moment of happiness....the joy that boils the inner self of man's strength to reach the twilight dreams of today....thank you...and God bless.....A 10+++++

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Randy Hogan 12 June 2009

I Luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv this poem 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ The sun brings me warmth against my skin, but it doesn't warm me within but the night brings me back to you again. Over and over. There I am lost in your loving light for the twilight that twinkles around your beauty that rains down on me as silver mist there I get lost in the sweetest Dreams Of my Venus

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 June 2009

'MY TWILIGHT DREAMS' Another mesmerizing, splendid piece from you... very enchanting, captivating picture you have shared to us the twilight to dusk..the music..the wonderful night..so vivid... the beautiful song...so audible... your love expressed sincerely and heartily......with a touch of divinity... He knows you love Him and will know Him fully in due time Anju... In this piece, you have expressed the beauty in you inside out... and by this piece..He know you know Him and love Him... .For He alone made all the beauty of the twilight, the melody of the song and for the wisdom He impart with you... Your Twilight Dreams...will eventually happens to you... i really love this piece Anju....this goes to my favorites.. for your Twilight dreams to come true....I pray too, my friend.. For this excellent and divine piece 10++++++++ for you... l♥ vel♥ ts, _maia_

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Mahfooz Ali 09 June 2009

Really a wonderful piece...... and a true feelings embedded......10+++++++++++++++++++

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Ency Bearis 09 June 2009

wonderful poem..nice to read all the way..lovely...10

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Muhammad Ali 09 June 2009

lovely piece Anjali after a long time a poem by you on love.... great 10..

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Vaibhav Pandey 08 June 2009

a great expressive write......words flowed so beautifully...10

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anurag duggal 08 June 2009

its lovely magical true felling of an innocent heart ...thanks a lot for sharing your beauty of words love anurag

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Bob Blackwell 08 June 2009

Anjali, you have a way of expressing your thoughts so beautifully, evening is a time for reflection, the quiet end of day allows us to relax and think. Bob 10+

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 07 June 2009

wonderful. simply amazing expressions. this is obviously anjali's poem. beautifully crafted. thank you.

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Subroto Chatterjee 06 June 2009

Hmm...we are back to your man again...With all the pent-up energy you've spent in trying to get his attention, wonder what's keeping him away? ? Cheers. Subroto

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