My Turn Comments

Very impressive write, Richard Lackman. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Death in itself is hard to accept, but knowing it is imminent because of a sickness, must be so hard to bear. Your poem demonstrates a caring attitude and concern for such circumstances. You are walking the proverbial mile in another's shoes, and this will help you understand what trauma they go through. You deserve praise and admiration for such an endeavor. A great poem.