Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, June 20, 2014

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I was rude and selfish
I wanted her to be finished
Not physically but morally
As I wanted the life differently
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

Beautiful and thoughtful write. Very true said, it happens many times. Loved reading it.

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The spin of the karmic wheel. Excellent write, Master Hasmukh. 20 Jun by Great Mystery to My turn

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welcome mericel remirez Just now · Unlike · 1

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Well written Dimitri Jagodinski22 minutes ago Hope things work out Comment 0 15 minutes

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very summersby thesea19 minutes ago sad but honest. Comment 0 14 minutes ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

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brilliant James Tee22 minutes ago this was like a story. Poetic, but it was a ride that was enjoyable, let me know when part two is up mate Comment 0 14 minutes

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Good poetic writing Denisha Irene Burton21 minutes ago I like your writing style. It is good work. It is not my typical genre of poetry, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Comment 0 15 minutes

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Inspired after Reading Ann Chen20 minutes ago People can be pretty stubborn most of the time, specially after you've reached a certain age. Something I recently learned from not only myself, but also my parents. However, it doesn't mean that change is impossible. It just means that you have to walk that extra mile or be encountered with a certain obstacle to want to Change :) Comment 0 15 minutes a

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The spin of the karmic wheel. Excellent write, Master Hasmukh. 45 minutes ago by Great Mystery | Reply

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I was rude and selfish I wanted her to be finished

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I was rude and selfish I wanted her to be finished

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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