My Tryst With A Parasite Comments

Good flow of images and words. nice piece

sandra ma'm...this is such an enjoyable poem...very funny..and your narration was simply impeccable...10 and a fav.

: 0) what a scene you made...you caught eyes...this is an awesome hilarious narrative piece...well done..10/10

'You had paid for one ticket But were able to watch Two performances”'.....................waaaaaaaaa...my gosh, , i smiled...

This is a very interesting piece and enjoyed reading this. I read this twice this morning, and I cannot forget the scene.Really, a hilarious, humorous piece.. A talented poet you are...

Your final line is tres magnifique! ! ! And the whole tale is penned with a keen ear for the ridiculous. I assume this story is true. You certainly have a gift for comedic narration. Excellent piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

LOL, this is so funny...hope it never happens to me...my skin is crawling....poor you....you had to deal with two creeps!

Sandra, am still laughing. its so hilarious. i was hooked from the first line. you are exceptionally good at narrating. ending is superb. love Mamta

wowwwwwwwww Sandra lovely poem, very hilarious all the while it made me think whether the parasite was the 'neighbour's flea' very humourous. I really loved it -10 anjali

wow............humorous poem.........i cannot stop laughing........but at times we need not practise nonviolence.......

Sandra, interesting and very amusing poem. I often wonder why we gain amusement from other peoples discomfort. However the way you handled this situation I thought was excellent, and your poem too. 10++

Loved it Sandra. It really is a scream! I liked your narrative style with crisp lines and the surprise at the bottom! I had ants in my pants at work once, and believe me it can happen! 10 love Karin

Sandra, All I can say, is “I’m blown away! ” I saw every word you said.. Your dreadful plight In black and white like on old TV.... With actors like WC “Madam, kindly remove your hat” But what I got most from your tale, your special gift to me..... What you did show, and now I know........ Is, “All poems DON”T have to rhyme! ! ” Thank you. Luv Ya, Robert

Hilarious Sandra. Very good. Once I wrote a poem in Telugu, similar to this, a conversation with a mosquito........a satire........I could relate this poem with mine and also our thoughts, themes very much mingle.

This is a very expressive and even humorous poem, Sandra, and it was a great pleasure to read. I liked your short, crisp lines in it, which were very effective in conveying your tale to the reader. You are a very gifted poet and your work is always a delight to read. Carl.

great humor sandra i wonder who the parasite really was lol 10

An absorbing narrative with a humour which can only come from experience.... an unforgettable evening at the theatre for you Sandra.........10/10 from Fay.

jocularly written poem how people misinterpret our discomfort at a place where all are are supposed to remain calm and watch the show,2 shows in one ticket ha ha ha ha 10++++ha ha

Sandra, 'two performances..one ticket', , , humor with a dig....the one that digs in the body and the other in mind. It was my pleasure to read it. CP

parasites are of two types...those creep on you physically and those not...good narration...you had to cope with two parasites there...thanks...10