Tuesday, January 14, 2020

My Trusty Old Alarm Clock Comments

Rating: 5.0

After my day's work is done,
And I come home at night.
I write a poem freshly spun,
And in myself I'm alright.
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Shaun Cronick
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Soran M. H 15 January 2020

very nice rhymed poem ،amazing very simply addressing very important theme, one of the most mystery component of the life which is the time scale, with superb harmony ending: A trusted timer I must agree, Reliable like life's bedrock. I love each tick you give me, My trusty old alarm clock.+++++++10/10 always

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Shaun Cronick 28 March 2020

Thanks Soran for your kind and welcome comments. Time is a funny old thing sometimes. Thanks again and take care and also, enjoy life.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 January 2020

What a lovely poem. A tribute to a trusty old alarm clock. This poem resonates with me. I am a lover of clocks. Their sound sometimes make you feel you have company. Beautifully crafted and well executed with great rhyme.

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Shaun Cronick 15 January 2020

Thank you for your beautiful and honourable comment Rose Marie. I'm glad you enjoyed a chap in work, a good man, said write a fun one about a clock. Thanks again Rose Marie and take care.

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