Tuesday, March 27, 2007

My True Self Comments

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i'll never be a shadow
that will evetually disappears
within the dark, the darkness which will consume all
i'll never be a memory
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jennifer her
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Someone Else 30 March 2007

wonderfully voiced poem, but the errata (typos) need to be corrected to enable the reader to appreciate the message w/o having to stumble over obvious mistakes in form which in themselves may create a sesnse of doubt in your truly capable talent. On first glance, there are eight simple-to-correct errors. Proof it. This can be done right on line.

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