Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, September 22, 2012

My True Faith Comments

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My true faith

She is my true faith
I wished her to remain same till death
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2012

Long and a tiny bit confusing Kyla Gray1 hour ago This was good. it was also very long. Thank you for sharing. I didn't get it. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it is true feeling for love and frank admission +1 it's pretty good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2012

Sim Plexity1 hour ago there's a rhythm and continuity to it i just felt too many of the same words were used to rhyme or compare to. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago site single repetition, i bet, though poem is finished at one go

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2012

My true faith She is my true faith I wished her to remain same till death

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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