Sunday, June 11, 2006
My Trenches Comments
Rating: ★4.8
I invited him to go to war
And come into my trenches
To be pressed against a cold, brick wall
To endure my strokes and clenches
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Lea Simpson
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M S
22 June 2006
beauty is not perfection, it is a perfect combination of flaws. this one really struck a chord, Lea
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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler
22 June 2006
i love the wordplay between 'flaws' and 'flaunted'. another beaut, Lea! Jake
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7/26/2025 12:38:03 PM # 1.0.0
Like the gauntlet/flaunted rhyme and the almost brutal imagery. I give you a ten for this war. -chuck