Sunday, April 20, 2008

My Tree* Comments

Rating: 3.1

I see a man:
He sits atop the roof of his house
Idle.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

A very nice interesting poem.10++

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Sadiqullah Khan 19 September 2008

what a personification, , the empathy in the last lines is superb, , , excellent theme, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , trees are such loving crearure and specially when they are old..10

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I can see his spirit respond To the balming tale of regeneration It took you a tad longer to let go of such a deeply trenched love. I can see stories of many a seasons in this work; truly a finest tribute to nature. I have also nursed the same love and some of these distinguished giants that add to the beauty of Lahore have become my permanent mental furniture- an ambience of eternal peace with nature Thanks indeed rehan hyder

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