I see a man:
He sits atop the roof of his house
Idle.
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what a personification, , the empathy in the last lines is superb, , , excellent theme, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , trees are such loving crearure and specially when they are old..10
I can see his spirit respond To the balming tale of regeneration It took you a tad longer to let go of such a deeply trenched love. I can see stories of many a seasons in this work; truly a finest tribute to nature. I have also nursed the same love and some of these distinguished giants that add to the beauty of Lahore have become my permanent mental furniture- an ambience of eternal peace with nature Thanks indeed rehan hyder
A very nice interesting poem.10++