My Train Of Thoughts Comments
I close my eyes and it starts to rain
In that instant my mind flies as I get lost in my brain
My heart tries, over and over to refrain
from these deceiving lies, but am overpowered and get carried away in this train
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The steady roll of the train wheels; rumble throughout this poem. Keep working those images.
The steady roll of the train wheels; rumble throughout this poem. Keep working those images.
You captured some precious aspects of love and desire. Really nicely put!
Great poem man, like my friend Unwritten soul said, you are on the right track my friend.
Well train need a reel and if your mind used to thought in good reel dont worry you are safe...may your train dream will stop at the best destination soon..nice write, keep it up_Unwritten Soul
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7/19/2025 9:51:36 PM # 1.0.0
Wonderful poem! I lack further words