My Tour Comments

expeditions are awesome, give that you have people or conditions meant for it. nice expression in simple language.

nice poem Neetha! holiday mood! the rhyme scheme is awesome yar! I can see the excitement for going tour with friends :) keep it up yar! ! ! ! !

It must be a nice tour then. Must have enjoyed it :) Nice thought and feelings.

...too simple to name it a recent poem!