A long standing relationship abruptly ended
My tobacconist and I had a falling out
My life no more shall be controlled by the evil weed
The many I had smoked had risen to the heavens
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I very much enjoyed this short vignette. What a great way to celebrate giving up a bad habit, write a lovely poem. Thank you for letting me read and comment on your work. Peace, L&T
I like this my friend, very cleansing.... i'm working on doing the same haha -david