Wednesday, August 5, 2020

My Timeless Rock Comments

Rating: 4.0

My time is like a runaway train,
Many things to cram in one day.
Gone forever those days of halcyon,
Hard keeping today's world at bay.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 06 August 2020

Wonderfully poem filled with inspired imagery! Yes everything moves too fast for my liking these days. One day I hope to move to that idyllic/ bucolic cottage in the woods and completely move away from the insidious, modern rat race. I just hope that my namesake Dominic Cummings doesn't have the same ideas...imagine him as a next door neighbour...aaargh! Anyhow, it's a timeless ten from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 August 2020

A poetic gem that breathes hope. Uplifting message with wisdom and insight. Each and every stanza stands out with great rhyme. To my Poem List.

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