Sunday, January 3, 2016

My Three Comments

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When I was teenager,
My time was eternal,
My health was typical,
But my money was little.
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Abderrahmane Dakir
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M Asim Nehal 29 February 2016

Three stages of life nicely explored......Simple yet meaningful, short yet philosophical...Loved it...10++++

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Thank you Mr. Mohammed for reading this poem.

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Lyn Paul 05 January 2016

Health and simplicity are so valuable. Lovely write. Thank You

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Abderrahmane Dakir 06 January 2016

Thank you for reading. Your comment means a lot for me.

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Driss Ezzireg 03 January 2016

Nice reflection on life.Thank you Si Abderrahmane for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 January 2016

Thank you for reading and your comment. I like it so much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 January 2016

Health was typical with little money. Very fantastic poem shared definitely.10

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 January 2016

Thank you so much for reading, I l enjoyed with your comment.

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