My Three Lovers Comments

what would be the best tittle for that?

It is very beautiful

Owsm poetry

I loved the idea of this poem, clever and well-done.

Brilliant concept and well executed. Thanks.

Forget yesterday my friend for he remains sweet memory. Though today bores you yet do not close your door, love may develop in a while. The future is a dream, he may lingers around you but having no guts to propose is as good as nothing. Today is what counts my dear. Your analogy in this poem is great, I liked it. Highest mark.

yes...i am longing for yesterday too..i hope you are known :)