My Thoughts On This Saturday.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

My Thoughts On This Saturday....

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POEM NUMBER 906
My Thoughts On This Saturday....

A fortnight ago, I went to Paris, my most favourite city,
and visited the Notre Dame,
please read, thank you,

I ignite the invisible candles
how is that able?
I delight to may lit the candles in the Notre Dame
candles are oft invisible here
since it´s oft very dark
earth dark
happiest to ignite
the Light so lite
if you peruse my words up here
constantly know that God is here
the candles I could ignite, though greatest danger there is
not the wires, but the instant fires,
as result of too many obsolete wires

but know He is my greatest bliss
His Love in my life and all there is

Remember, I ignite the invisible candles in the Notre Dame
Notre Dame, now darkest spot
remember, on that same spot is God

thank you so much for reading on Saturday,
now I am not amongst the hay
at home at my desk after a fortnight ago been to Paris,
got from God greatest Bliss and All there is
remember dear poet friends, He does exist....


Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Saturday 2 Nov 2019
at 11.33 hrs Dutch Time

Saturday, November 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: blessings,god,love,noting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
POEM NUMBER 906 -
SATURDAY 2 NOVEMBER 2019 at 11.33 hours Morn DUTCH TIME

thank you so much for reading on Saturday,
now I am not amongst the hay
at home at my desk after a fortnight ago been to Paris,
got from God greatest Bliss and All there is
remember dear poet friends, He does exist....


Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Saturday 2 Nov 2019
at 11.33 hrs Dutch Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2019

Saturday thoughts are special before the prayer day arrives. Revisiting this poem I am truly very happy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 November 2019

A wonderful poem that strongly convey that there is God. A woman of deep faith will always constantly assert the existence of God. And that is what is beautiful in you as a Poet. Loved the ultimate line of this marvelous write. Yes, God does exist. A well conveyed beautuful thought.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2019

It is glad that a fortnight ago you have visited Paris, your most favourite city, and visited the Notre Dame where you ignited the invisible candles. You have so touchingly inscribed the blessing of God and his love towards you. Here it may be cited...but know He is my greatest bliss / His Love in my life and all there is / Remember, I ignite the invisible candles in the Notre Dame / Notre Dame, now darkest spot.. Beautiful poem. Thank you very much.

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Kingsley Egbukole 02 November 2019

A beautiful piece. Thanks for sharing. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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