Friday, September 16, 2011

My Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.5

why is life so bad?
why is life so sad?
why are things so mean?
why cant things be clean?
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Jennifer Johnson
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David Beckham 27 September 2011

Very moving, very griping... much attention to emotions, much appeal to the mind. Very perfect in dialogue. Excellent work. tfs 10/10

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