Saturday, December 17, 2011

My Thought At Night Comments

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This naked world rolls on
Like the cob when we threshed the corn.
Our days of prime, we gadded-about,
All was void but we eked-out.
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Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle
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Judith Furedi 26 December 2011

This is even better, yet. I don't especially care for 'only death is certain' - because I like ambiguity in poetry! That's just a little 'too certain'!

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Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle

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