Saturday, April 5, 2014

My Those Precious Moments Comments

Rating: 4.8

O ‘ God You give me back those golden days,
What you snatched from me in those early days
You made me weeping for a few pence only
You robbed those thrilling moments off from me.
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Kevin Patrick 16 April 2014

The past is a country rolling away, and the future a station that's constantly grey. Like this, its filled with the yearning of yesterday but the cold acceptance of the present. Longing can be an incurable pain.

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Srabanti Guha 11 April 2014

I just loved this beautiful poem, the way you've expressed about missing those days in your childhood, is wonderful

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Yash Shinde 06 April 2014

..a passion filled poetry.I love your craving for those golden dayswonderful write.......... ............. ..I cordially invite you to read my poem- '...to bosom thee....I'll rise''..and ''never look like one''..plzz share your views in comments.....regards

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Roseann Shawiak 06 April 2014

Very beautiful poem, Amitava! ! You have expressed your feelings very poignantly. Our pasts improve with age it seems. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur

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