Saturday, September 27, 2014

My Thin Veneer Comments

Rating: 4.0

Don't look behind my thin veneer
Or you will see me hiding here
Bared to the world I cannot be
Never can I let all others see
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Noah Body
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Achill Lad 30 September 2014

Wow, a tortured mind. If this is not the produce of an imaginative mind you need to seek help. All the same it is well written. Flows beautifully.

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