Thursday, November 24, 2016

My Thanksgiving Is Not Happy Comments

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When I think of those who are sleeping in the street,
how could my Thanksgiving be sweet!

When I look at my brothers and sisters, who have nothing to eat,
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 November 2016

This poem was very touchy, melancholic and sad. At first, I felt guilty. And then the mood and the words got less bitter, better for my soul. That was very thoughtful of you to think about the neediest, the sick and the homeless. I love this poem.

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Rosie Bourget 28 November 2016

The inspiration just came out the blew. Thank you so much!

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Rosie Bourget 28 November 2016

Salut a toi Hebert, question de te remercier pour ton commentaire. Cela me fait tres plaisir! Tiens bon.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 24 November 2016

A tremendous and marvellous creation.....poignant.....loved it :)

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Rosie Bourget 28 November 2016

Thank you. That encourages me to do more.

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