Tuesday, May 19, 2009

My Teddy Bear Comments

Rating: 5.0

Broken and scarred
my life so hard
blood trickling down
falling to the ground
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Lizzie Resendiz
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Taylor Donnelly 16 March 2010

Beautifully written. I love the words you used.

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Jerry Hughes 03 January 2010

Indeed, goodbye, goodbye and GOODBYE!

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Suicidal Magic 25 June 2009

i can so feel ur pain! amazing poem! 10+++

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Julia Wakeman 22 May 2009

the sad emotions of this poem are multiplied by the fact that the teddy bear is the only thing/person who you will miss or you think will miss you. great use of an object in the poem.

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Jeremiah Gorman 22 May 2009

awwwwwww thats so sad my gator can eat your bear

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 May 2009

'no one would care except maybe my Teddy Bear' Charming and touchy piece.

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Lizzie Resendiz

Lizzie Resendiz

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