Friday, June 23, 2006

My Tears Will Win Comments

Rating: 4.8

As I lay here in my bed at night,
My urge to cry, I try to fight,
The day has been a total spin,
I realize my tears will win,
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Desiree macenzie
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Chelsi Ruffing 07 August 2006

I know how this can feel....this is a really good way of putting how you feel..this poem is very good......I been through this once before

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Dustin Bennefield 02 August 2006

I hope this does not reflect your everyday life. This is still great though. ~Ink

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Sierra M 02 August 2006

I'm really sorry you feel this way. It's still a very good poem.

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Jessica Veksler 02 August 2006

Great poem! Keep up the good work: ].

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Morgan S. 23 June 2006

....That poem Totally explains me...wow... Your a great poet... Morgan: ]

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