My Tears; Rain Comments

this poem is amazing! ! ! ! i love how u write with ur thoughts and feelings controlling your pen! ! ! !

I love your poetry so much power is in your word Kat sorrow

I look up in the sky, And the clouds will cry for me....... Such powerful words... MMI

I see... you are not the lady of doom but a lady of sadness is all and i know you will turn into the lady of joy very soon (smile) i will pray very much for that to happen. I have had tragedy in my life as well... but gladly God has helped me through it all!

really good well done. please can you have a look at some of my poems sometime please. well done

Great poem, Kickass details. Very well written.

Different.....quite like it......Ruthy

i really like this poem.. it seems to have meaning behind meanings

It's too great poem if you're still 13 You touched me by your poem keep on your great work

you don't write like youre young in age... but who says age has anything to with it? your good.....keep writing... thanks for sharing...

Wow are you sure you're 13 really great poem I mean really really great poem. We sometimes feel the clouds fill up over us and then burst as a result of a not so good bladder. It hurts to be constantly drench in cold rain when we're already sick but that's life. I find myself always being rained on. Thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !

you did not write like a 13 year old.. you are good! you first know, shoudl it be no?

The stealing of souls? Nature itself crying because of your triumph? I never even imagined that such a dark scene could be so... well... breathtaking