My Tears And Dew Drops Comments

amazingly written the tears drop of inner feeling by the course of time becomes the dew on the new born leaf in the new day morning

Hey, Bharati! The image sitting as a dew drop on the tip of a grass is pure poetry for me. If it were my poem I’d make adjustments for its sound, but such differences are what distinguish us one from another. -Glen

What a lively expressed poem- -fragile and tender and so very straught from the heart honest. 10++++++++= and onto my fav list! ! ! !

this poem is so much subtle that it is hard to say a word, to keep this touchy image unshaken. yes, after all, this universe is nothing but what we feel. very nice poem

Feeling is well combined with dew drops. A sensitive poem is nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

I liked the delicate touch and subtle nuances of the poem very feeling penned.

by " have turned cloud" , do you mean evaporated, i wonder, or turned to a mist? i don't understand the physics which caused the mingling, but i like the analogy; it IS and analogy, i think! This sounds supernatural, but i like it. line 8: " i knew" : Of which sentence is this a part? MORE punctuation would be helpful. but i like it. bri :)

A wonderful and lovely poem that captures the connection between humanity and nature. A poem of great depth that only a few minds can conceive. Cleverly written.

This is such a lovely poem, dear Bharati. I liked the sensitive and delicate nature of the poem. By mingling the human tears with that of the dew drops on the grass, you have established a deep connection with nature. An elegant poem that deserves a full score......10 To my Poem List as well.

That is original and beautiful and everything I have come to expect from your poetic soul and talented imagination! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list

Nature! ! Life! Love and art; Problems of the world! ! ! Muse of my tears and dew drops. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A sweet poem on winter dew. Flowing smooth it makes an interesting reading. Loved it. 'When I become dry and thirsty In every winter They wait for me On the tip of grass.'.. this is simply awesome. Thanks.