Friday, March 24, 2023

My Tears Comments

Rating: 4.5

The sun spreads its wonders
Before it sets in
And my heart that has lost
Its very own
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Indira Renganathan 13 August 2023

Crying out in solitude all our pains is a great relief- remedy for our beaten heart...a thoughtful write

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 May 2023

Sad, yet well expressed and stirring.

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S H 11 May 2023

A powerpacked poem

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S H 11 May 2023

Last para is heart breaking., you filled all your emotions in this poem.

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The realisation that " My tears are the key ….. Liberates me from The mountain of loneliness. " Really wonderful

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 May 2023

TEARS, amazing poem greatest worded, truly very fascinating words, a gem, a Masterpiece!

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Kevin Patrick 09 May 2023

This is a beautiful poem Rose, a release of human emotions. Tears can be the shower of the souls rage Powerful stuff.

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Made a revisit today. Enjoyed reading this wonderful poem once again. Marked to come back.

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PREMKUMAR C N 01 May 2023

Brilliant poem with beautiful similes. 'The sun spreads its wonders Before it sets in And my heart that has lost Its very own Suddenly releases its pain.' Beautiful poetic expressions.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 May 2023

Heart-touching, heart-wrenching is this poem, the more I read, the more tears are flooding, a truly Masterpiece, a gem for my heart, God Bless you with your choice of words, dear Rose Marie

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 April 2023

CONGRATULATIONS, dear Rose Marie, this gorgeous poem is today on number 33 on the Top 100 of the Best Member Poems on Poem Hunter. Once again my CONGRATULATIONS.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 April 2023

I just peeped again, this gorgeous poem MY TEARS is now on number 30. Just now! CONGRATULATIONS again with this gem, this Masterpiece! Truly most deserving, I like very much the building up of this fascinating poem

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Today is ranked as number 30. Congratulations, dear Rose Marie. A gem, a Masterpiece

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 April 2023

Truly terrible is the mountain of loneliness, amazing phrase The Mountain Of Loneliness.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 30 April 2023

Emotion flow. Beautifully poetic. Congrats Rose Marie

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Juhaina Tumlu 29 April 2023

As they roll down the pain will get relived. Nicely worded poem.

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Now this poem has moved much ahead to position #26. Congratulations, Rose Marie

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Ranks #24 today. Congratulations, Rose Marie

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 April 2023

I still enjoyed your excellently worded poem MY TEARS enormously, thank you so much for sharing, in gratitude, my revisit

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David Wood 24 April 2023

Beautifully written poem that so many people will relate to. Number 38 in Best Member poems, should be Number One, which I hope it soon will be.

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David Wood 24 April 2023

Beautifully written poem that so many oeople

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Rob Lamberton 17 April 2023

…to feelings I might otherwise not recognize. Thanks for sharing your tears with us! (Sorry I kept accidentally hitting send before I was ready)

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Rob Lamberton 17 April 2023

…alert me ton

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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