The sun spreads its wonders
Before it sets in
And my heart that has lost
Its very own
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The realisation that " My tears are the key ….. Liberates me from The mountain of loneliness. " Really wonderful
TEARS, amazing poem greatest worded, truly very fascinating words, a gem, a Masterpiece!
This is a beautiful poem Rose, a release of human emotions. Tears can be the shower of the souls rage Powerful stuff.
Made a revisit today. Enjoyed reading this wonderful poem once again. Marked to come back.
Brilliant poem with beautiful similes. 'The sun spreads its wonders Before it sets in And my heart that has lost Its very own Suddenly releases its pain.' Beautiful poetic expressions.
Heart-touching, heart-wrenching is this poem, the more I read, the more tears are flooding, a truly Masterpiece, a gem for my heart, God Bless you with your choice of words, dear Rose Marie
CONGRATULATIONS, dear Rose Marie, this gorgeous poem is today on number 33 on the Top 100 of the Best Member Poems on Poem Hunter. Once again my CONGRATULATIONS.
I just peeped again, this gorgeous poem MY TEARS is now on number 30. Just now! CONGRATULATIONS again with this gem, this Masterpiece! Truly most deserving, I like very much the building up of this fascinating poem
Today is ranked as number 30. Congratulations, dear Rose Marie. A gem, a Masterpiece
Truly terrible is the mountain of loneliness, amazing phrase The Mountain Of Loneliness.
As they roll down the pain will get relived. Nicely worded poem.
Now this poem has moved much ahead to position #26. Congratulations, Rose Marie
I still enjoyed your excellently worded poem MY TEARS enormously, thank you so much for sharing, in gratitude, my revisit
Beautifully written poem that so many people will relate to. Number 38 in Best Member poems, should be Number One, which I hope it soon will be.
…to feelings I might otherwise not recognize. Thanks for sharing your tears with us! (Sorry I kept accidentally hitting send before I was ready)
Crying out in solitude all our pains is a great relief- remedy for our beaten heart...a thoughtful write