My Tears.... Some stay back, some roll down
Some I am ashamed of, some are my crown.
Some curse me, some bless me
Some are my protector, some undress me.
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when tears comes out from ones eyes their take the pain which made them come out with them.....it a fantastic poem.......really wonderful words and it's obvious that you made a great effort letting these wonderful words come out from your talented mind....keep writing...4 poems are few for a great mind like yours....i'm waiting for your new poems...
A great poem about your tears....fine ode written in a melodious verses....great rhymes and rhythm...10
They sarcastically tell me that Life can take a Toss They simply don't leave ur eye, they come out for a cause. they donot comeout without any cause and this is where they play an important reole inthelife...beautifull write and with some message....10 read mine cry not... place called home.....all dreams not come true....
@ Kente: thank u for ur kind words.... believe me, it will force me to write better
Walia wow this is nubelievable, yes i salute u u can write, express and communicte in the simplest of terms and keep it interesting, wow
this is one f my best poems by far, it rings in my mind each time a tear falls from my eyes. i love it so