My Tears Comments

I can call them my enemies For the weakness they reveal Or I could call them friends For the pain they ease, this is the perfect writing. your poetry is so deep and real

Very passionate poem feeling with others. 'Life without tears is a desert.'

'I can call them my enemies For the weakness they reveal Or I could call them friends For the pain they ease'... More tears to shed more kisses to follow, Emma! You have very nicely personified tears in your poem...and very meaningfully too! The quoted lines i liked most...10

Tears of joy, tears of pain Tears relieve of all strain Stony hearts melt as they rain They are the life's sweetest refrain. CP

Poem well written good write

value of love: tears , beautiful and touching, always joyfull tears... thanks for sharing 10

very strong and deep words emma well done