Saturday, December 26, 2020

My Tears Comments

Rating: 4.2

I have let my tears flow,
I cannot conceal them for long.
The pain already caused that I suffer,
Has become unbearable;
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Ravinder Kumar Soni
COMMENTS
Varsha M 14 March 2021

Revisiting sir. Yes, with the flow of tears the pain, agony and dirt washes off. So well flowed the tears through your verses.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 March 2021

Beautiful heart is sewn into this! ... I Pray you may find much beauty and kindness in life too! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 February 2021

A most sensitive poem, it touched my being. Crystal clearly composed. Poetry can be an outlet for pains as well as our tears. Brilliant poem,5 stars!

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Varsha M 10 January 2021

Sir this is really beautiful. Yes when in pain we all wish to die...but somehow we fight and come out victorious...so tears are always helpful in bringing down the paun... thank-you so much.

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Suzae Chevalier 28 December 2020

Oh Ravinder I don't want you to cry and not see heaven...Please read my poems on Jesus. I don't want to cry for your soul.

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Anzelyne shideshe 27 December 2020

Awesome

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Elijah Johnson 27 December 2020

Beautiful!

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Dhiren Doley 27 December 2020

Yes, the poem reveals truth of life

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 December 2020

Ph has desisted from allowing to post my full note, I believe. I will wait for ph to publish it the post again.

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 December 2020

Profound, serious poetry, though I don't subscribe to the end-of-the-tunnel point of view in life. We should shed tears NOT for what we lo

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 December 2020

Profound serious poetry, though I don't subscribe to the "EndOf the Tunnel " point of view in life. Tears we should shed, not for what

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Dr. Antony Theodore 27 December 2020

Allow me to shed my tears, They must flow from my eyes; My eyes should not be dry. Wonderful expressions and full of emotions. tony

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Sachidananda Panda 27 December 2020

tears are pure as they roll to reveal the anguish without dilution... they purge the heart and mind... they are the cleansing elements of all the weird things... pray they would purge the soul... Thanks....

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Varsha M 26 December 2020

Tears are magical. They carry all pain and makes you healthy and sound. Let it flow off carrying away all sorrow.

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 December 2020

Let the sorrows dissolve in the flowing tears. Touchy poem

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Ravinder Kumar Soni 26 December 2020

Thanks, Bernard and a merry Xmas to you and members of your parish. May God bless you all.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 December 2020

A well written poem... Truly heartfelt...5 stars*****

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